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The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.

The map below shows the changes that have taken place in Meadowside village and Fronton, a neighboring town, since 1962. Report the main features and make comparisions if relevant.
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The given maps compare Meadowside village and Fronton, which is the town that neighbouring village, have been changing since 1962.
Overall
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, the rural and urban areas which were separating from each other have been merged;
moreover
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, the number of facilities which were in these districts has increased three various times.
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 the plans, in the first years two regions did not that any
road
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 that connected the two areas;
furthermore
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, fonton had a railway that has been the same as all time but now has been developing and building a station near it.
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, Meadowside had a narrow
road
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 which has been altered to a highway and one
road
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 added to it which connected two areas since 1985. The pictures show in 1985, Meadowside Village near the main
road
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 built super store, leisure complex, and, house state;
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, those places have been the same as now. Today,
this
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 city has a hotel, which is near the station, and a business park, in the front of station.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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