The charts below show internet use for different purposes in Australia in 2010 and 2011 and the percentage by users. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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Four charts show
internet
use
for three
different tasks in Australia and the percentage
by users
. We can see the percentage
among three
topics: Social media
, paying bills
online and emailings
in the first chart and the Correct your spelling
emailing
percentage
of ages
of users
in last
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the last
three
.
First of all, Australians mostly use
internet
for emailing with the highest Add an article
the internet
percentage
of user
. Fix the agreement mistake
users
In addition
, social media
and paying bills
online is
not as popular as emailing. Following the Correct subject-verb agreement
are
last
three
, Australians of various ages
use
internet
for paying Add an article
the internet
bills
online and emailing stay
stable Correct subject-verb agreement
stays
whereas
the difference of social media
. According to
the social media
chart, younger people tend to use
internet
for social Add an article
the internet
media
more than older people, 100% people
in the age between 18 to 25 years old do that. Despite the same Change preposition
of people
percentage
of use
, payings
Correct your spelling
paying
bills
online and social media
’s ages
of users
are dissimilar. Otherwise
, emailing’s amount of use
is higher than online buying but it’s
Correct your spelling
its
ages
of Fix the agreement mistake
age
users
is similar to online shopping.Submitted by dohuyhoang on
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