The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons  where relevant.
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how the manufacture of frozen salmon cakes.
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, there are 2 process diagrams which
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a fish
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picture with ingredients,
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the presentation below illustrates
man-made
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the man-made
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, linear process, which has 7 stages with a few raw materials. It starts with delivery and finishes with store and dispatch. The first presentation outlines
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of components which contain peas, fish, potato and sauce in microwaveable
container
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. The second process diagram
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a fish pie production line. First of all, a delivery machine
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a
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raw components
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to one month. At
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point, potatoes are cleaned, peeled and sliced by equipment. Chips of vegetables are boiled until prepared. When it
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should chill them and store for adding to
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tart. Following that
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delivered fresh salmon is mixed with lemon juice and salt.
Consequency
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, spiced seafood is steamed oven and removed from
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and bones. The next stages are inspecting and
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peas, gravy and ready potatoes. The final product
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through
phase
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phases
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such
as wrapping and freezing. From
this
, the iced food is packaged and dispatched.
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