The diagrams below show information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams below show information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two process diagrams illustrate the production of the
fish
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pie
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and its components.
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, they are two pictures, which consist of two man-made process diagrams. At
first,
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the liner procedure starts
from
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with
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delivering raw ingredients, like
potatoes
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and fresh salmon, to the factory,
finishes
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and finishes
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with
store
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storing
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.
At
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second,
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there is the filling and items of the
fish
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pie
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.
Pie
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from
fish
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begins production with
potatoes
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and
the
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apply
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fresh salmon, which are delivered to the plant. After that,
potatoes
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go through cleaning, peeling, slicing, boiling, chilling and storing stages , in order to add them into the
pie
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. Fresh salmon,
also
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passes through some steps for blending with
potatoes
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and wrapping into the
fish
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pie
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to produce the final product
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Fish
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The fish
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pie
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consists of four items. They are peas,
fish
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, sauce and
potatoes
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. Three of them, peas,
fish
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and sauce are mixed and poured into
microwaveable
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a microwaveable
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container. The top
are
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is
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covered with
potatoes
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, pie, potatoes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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