The diagrams below show information about the manufacture of forzen fish pie. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two process diagrams illustrate the production of the
fish
pie
and its components. Overall
, they are two pictures, which consist of two man-made process diagrams. At first,
the liner procedure starts from
delivering raw ingredients, like Change preposition
with
potatoes
and fresh salmon, to the factory, finishes
with Correct word choice
and finishes
store
. Wrong verb form
storing
At
Change preposition
Second
second,
there is the filling and items of the fish
pie
.
Pie
from fish
begins production with potatoes
and the
fresh salmon, which are delivered to the plant. After that, Correct article usage
apply
potatoes
go through cleaning, peeling, slicing, boiling, chilling and storing stages , in order to add them into the pie
. Fresh salmon, also
passes through some steps for blending with potatoes
and wrapping into the fish
pie
to produce the final product
Fish
Add an article
The fish
pie
consists of four items. They are peas, fish
, sauce and potatoes
. Three of them, peas, fish
and sauce are mixed and poured into microwaveable
container. The top Add an article
a microwaveable
are
covered with Change the verb form
is
potatoes
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, pie, potatoes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagrams" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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