You have rented a condominium (apartment). Under tenancy agreement, you are required to give a three-month notice period before vacating the condo. For some reasons, you have to give up the condo all of a sudden as you have to migrate to other city as soon as possible. Write a letter to your landlord, • explain the reason for a sudden decision of vacating the condo • ask for a special consideration • how you would feel if your special consideration is granted
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing
this
letter to tell you about my new job and for that I have to leave your
apart on early basis.
My name is Sophia Brown, I Correct pronoun usage
you
live
Wrong verb form
have lived
in
543- Moonstar Avenue , North York on your condominium Change preposition
at
since
3 years on rent. I want to inform you that I got a permanent job Change preposition
for
in
Embridge company located in Calgary. I know very well that Change preposition
at
according to
tenancy
agreement, I have to inform you about 3 months before Add an article
the tenancy
a tenancy
while
vacating. Correct word choice
apply
However
, I tried to tell whole
situation to my employer but he told me that the company Change the article
the whole
will
not wait for me Wrong verb form
would
three
months. He signed another person Change preposition
for three
instead
of my place.
I apologise for this
inconvenient
. As you know I already gave you Replace the word
inconvenience
two
Correct determiner usage
a
months
deposit. Would you forgo my Change noun form
month's
one month
rent? I know Add a hyphen
one-month
this
is not Correct article usage
a convinient
convinient
request but I do not have any other option.
It will highly be appreciated if you Correct your spelling
convenient
considere
my request. I thank you in advance and waiting for your positive reply.
Yours faithfully,
Sophia Brown.Correct your spelling
consider
considered
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task achievement
Ensure that you include all necessary information clearly and concisely. You mentioned your new job and the necessity of moving, but it would be more coherent to clearly explain why this is sudden and unavoidable.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical flow by organizing the information more clearly. You can separate your explanation of the sudden move and the request for special consideration to make each point more distinct.
coherence cohesion
Check for grammatical errors and sentence structure to make your letter more professional. For example, 'leave your apart on early basis' should be 'leave your apartment on short notice.'
task achievement
Your tone is polite and professional, which is suitable for a letter to your landlord.
task achievement
You included both the reason for your sudden decision and a request for special consideration, which makes your response complete.
coherence cohesion
You used appropriate greeting and closing phrases, showing a sense of formality and respect.