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Band 5.5

You have rented a condominium (apartment). Under tenancy agreement, you are required to give a three-month notice period before vacating the condo. For some reasons, you have to give up the condo all of a sudden as you have to migrate to other city as soon as possible. Write a letter to your landlord, • explain the reason for a sudden decision of vacating the condo • ask for a special consideration • how you would feel if your special consideration is granted

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing
this
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 letter to tell you about my new job and for that I have to leave
your
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you
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 apart on early basis. My name is Sophia Brown, I
live
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have lived
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in
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at
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 543- Moonstar Avenue , North York on your condominium
since
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for
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 3 years on rent. I want to inform you that I got a permanent job
in
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at
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 Embridge company located in Calgary. I know very well that
according to
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tenancy
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the tenancy
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 agreement, I have to inform you about 3 months before
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while
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apply
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vacating.
However
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, I tried to tell
whole
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the whole
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 situation to my employer but he told me that the company
will
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would
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 not wait for me
three
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for three
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 months. He signed another person
instead
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 of my place. I apologise for
this
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inconvenient
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inconvenience
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. As you know I already gave you
two
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a
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months
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month's
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 deposit. Would you forgo my
one month
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one-month
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 rent? I know
this
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 is not
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a convinient
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convinient
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convenient
 request but I do not have any other option. It will highly be appreciated if you
considere
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consider
considered
 my request. I thank you in advance and waiting for your positive reply. Yours faithfully, Sophia Brown.

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task achievement
Ensure that you include all necessary information clearly and concisely. You mentioned your new job and the necessity of moving, but it would be more coherent to clearly explain why this is sudden and unavoidable.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical flow by organizing the information more clearly. You can separate your explanation of the sudden move and the request for special consideration to make each point more distinct.
coherence cohesion
Check for grammatical errors and sentence structure to make your letter more professional. For example, 'leave your apart on early basis' should be 'leave your apartment on short notice.'
task achievement
Your tone is polite and professional, which is suitable for a letter to your landlord.
task achievement
You included both the reason for your sudden decision and a request for special consideration, which makes your response complete.
coherence cohesion
You used appropriate greeting and closing phrases, showing a sense of formality and respect.
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