The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flowing chart illustrates the process by which
sugar
is made from sugar
cane
. Overall
, the sugarcane cultivation process is divided into four stages, cultivation, harvesting, crushing and drying. First of all, the sugar
cane
must be grown and it will be ready to ripen in about 15 or 18 months. After the sugar
cane
is ripe, it can be harvested in two ways, by human labor and by technology. Next,
the resulting sugar
cane
is crushed through a special mill to obtain juice, and the most important thing is to boil the sugar
cane
juice and bring it to the level of syrup. The next step is
to place the sugar
in a technology called a centrifuge, which spins very fast to separate the crystals from the syrup, and
after the Correct word choice
apply
sugar
comes out of the centrifuge, it needs to be dried and the sugar
is ready to eat.Submitted by ieltswritingband99 on
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