The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps, which depict great detail, illustrate the revolution that occurred in Westley
town
in 1815.
Overall
, it can be observed that the town
is modernised with the development of amenities and residential areas in that town
recently.
To begin
with, all the trees in the Lenton
Woods were completely cut down and replaced with the Lenton
Housing Estate, which is situated next to Lake Lenton
. The Lord Westley’s House which used to be on the north of the town
, diminished and now the Lenton
Hotel and The Red Lion occupy that area. Additionally
, other facilities are constructed, including a museum, a cinema, and a shopping centre.
Turning to the road in Westley town
, it experienced considerable growth in length and now is able to cover the whole region, with numerous junctions. Finally
, with regard to transportation, a railway station was erected on the west side of the town
, that passed through an area that was supposed to be fields. The Twine Toll Bridge was also
demolished in order to build the railway.Submitted by maisarahamirah16 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, lenton with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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