The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps, which depict great detail, illustrate the revolution that occurred in Westley

town

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in 1815.

Overall

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, it can be observed that the

town

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is modernised with the development of amenities and residential areas in that

town

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recently.

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with, all the trees in the

Lenton

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Woods were completely cut down and replaced with the

Lenton

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Housing Estate, which is situated next to Lake

Lenton

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. The Lord Westley’s House which used to be on the north of the

town

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, diminished and now the

Lenton

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Hotel and The Red Lion occupy that area.

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, other facilities are constructed, including a museum, a cinema, and a shopping centre. Turning to the road in Westley

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, it experienced considerable growth in length and now is able to cover the whole region, with numerous junctions.

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, with regard to transportation, a railway station was erected on the west side of the

town

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, that passed through an area that was supposed to be fields. The Twine Toll Bridge was

also

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demolished in order to build the railway.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

173 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

residential area
amenities
thoroughfare
connectivity
industrial development
factory
public amenities
recreational facilities
educational facilities
residential expansion
apartment blocks
commercial activity
shopping centers
restaurants
single-family homes
development
open field
noticeable change
replacing
establishment

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The two maps below show the changes that have taken place in the town of Westley since 1815. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?