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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts, which depict great detail, provide information on the marital status of Canadians and Australians.
Overall
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, it can be observed that single citizens in
Canada
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 accounted for the largest proportion;
on the other hand
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, Australia has almost the same amount of single and married population.
To begin
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 with, separated couples in
Canada
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 occupied more than half, with 53% in total, making it the highest figure in the chart.
This
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 is followed by segregated Australians, which have an approximated discrepancy of 10% compared to
Canada
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.
However
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, Australia consists of a greater amount of married people than
Canada
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, with 46% and 29% respectively.
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, merely a scant minority of
Canada
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 (3%) experienced same-gender marriage. Turning to single individuals, people who are never married or widowed in
Canada
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 have a similar proportion of 7% for both,
while
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 5% of Australians are single and 6% are widowed.
Finally
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, both countries have the smallest amount of divorced citizens (1-2%).

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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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