You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include ● Where you stayed ● What the problems were ● How they can fix your complaints
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you because of the problem with my
room
.
I live in the 7th room
. There will be a conference with my company soon, but there are many problems in my room
.
The first thing that needs to be said is lack
of electricity. Correct article usage
the lack
Besides
electrical outlets don't
work. I can not charge my gadgets. And also
there is a problem with a
heating and hot water. Correct article usage
apply
Besides
I have a complaint service and behaivor
of the Correct your spelling
behaviour
room
attendants. They are very rough, they don't
clean my room
and they don't
bring on time what I order. It must be admitted that i
Change the capitalization
I
also
have a complaint biggest problem is noisy neighbours. I can't
rest and sleep because of them.
If you can give me another room
with
better condition or solve the problems in my Change preposition
in
room
.
I hope you consider my complaint.
Your faithfully.
Umirov Fayozbek.Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
Ensure you provide a more structured and detailed account of the problems you faced.
coherence cohesion
Organize your points in clear, distinct paragraphs for better readability.
task achievement
Try to elaborate more on how the problems affected your stay to make your complaint more compelling.
task achievement
You included all necessary elements like where you stayed, the problems, and a suggestion for resolution.
task achievement
You maintained a polite and formal tone throughout the letter, which is suitable for a complaint letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite