The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the production of grains, measured in million metric tons, from the years 2010 to 2015, with projections until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The above-presented table informs us about the quantity of produced grains between the
year
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2010 and 2030.
Overall
, it is evident that there has been
gradual
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rise in every category apart from rice, which struggled a little in 2015 but managed to pick up in the following year,
further
expected to continue its upward trend. Across all types, wheat has accounted for the most quantity of grain.
However
, its production has experienced
relatively
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slow rise, starting at 100 in 2010 and being projected to achieve 110
million
metric tons in the course of 20 years.
Conversely
, barley managed to grow rapidly from 50 in 2010 up to 80
million
metric tons in 2020, with the projections stating it could double its starting size in 2030. Maize’s growth has been relatively marginal, with 34.5
million
metric tons being produced in 2020, half
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more than 10 years before, and with
further
projections expecting that the same trend should continue in the decade ahead. As mentioned before, rice has experienced a slight drop in the first decade.
Nevertheless
, it is expected to match the upward trend in the following 10 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • metric tons
  • trend
  • projected
  • notable
  • increment
  • decrement
  • fluctuation
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • consistent
  • proportion
  • comparison
  • forecast
  • extrapolate
  • economic impact
  • environmental factors
  • yield
  • cultivation
  • sustainable
  • harvest
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sector
  • quantify
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