The graph below shows the number of sourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mani features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of sourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the mani features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line graph compares the
number
of
visitors
to a Caribbean
island
who stood on the
island
and on
cruise
ships
from 2010 to 2017. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the total
number
of tourists increased sharply in the whole period shown.
Also
,
while
, in the beginning, the
number
of
people
who preferred to stay on the
island
was more than the
number
of
people
who stood on
cruise
ships
,
this
trend changed over time. In 2010, close to 750 thousand
people
stood on the
island
,
while
the
number
of
visitors
who stood on
cruise
ships
was only 250 thousand. From 2010 to 2013, the
figure
for
people
who stood on
cruise
ships
experienced a fluctuation and reached 0.5
million
in 2013. In the same period, the
figure
for tourists who stood on the
island
remained stable at first and
then
jumped considerably to 1.5
million
. The
number
of
visitors
who stood on the
island
remained constant from 2013 to 2015.
However
, the
figure
for individuals who stood on
cruise
ships
rose dramatically to 1
million
and 250 thousand, just below the other
figure
. There was a milestone for both figures between 2015 and 2016, the
figure
for
people
who stood on
cruise
ships
overtook the
figure
for
people
who stood on the
island
. In 2017, the
number
of
people
who stood on the
island
became 1.5
million
, and the
number
for the other
figure
was 2
million
. It is worth mentioning that the
number
of total
visitors
rose gradually from 1
million
in 2010 to 3.5
million
in 2017.
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