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The line graph provides information about the number of the use of products in covert industry, namely, timber, paper and pulp in Europen country between 1980 nad 2000

The line graph provides information about the number of the use of products in covert industry, namely, timber, paper and pulp in Europen country between 1980 nad 2000
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The line graph illustrates the
number
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 of products used in industry
such
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 as timber, paper, and pulp (units in
million
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tonnes
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) in Europe between 1980 and 2000. From an
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen that the trend on every product's
number
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 usage was fluctuating,
therefore
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, paper usage has the highest growth over the given period compared to other products.
To begin
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 with, the sum of paper used began at 4
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980,
then
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 rose steadily to about 9 in 1995. After that, it's slight decline followed by an increase to 12
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.
Furthermore
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, the total
number
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 of timber used was around 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1960 and jumped to 10 in the next 5 years.
Subsequently
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, it plummeted until 2000 at approximately 7.5
million
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tonnes
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.
In addition
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, the
number
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 of
million
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tonnes
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 of pulp used was 6 in 1980,
then
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 increased slightly to 8 in the next decades. At that time, it remained steady until it increased to roughly 10
million
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tonnes
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 in 2000.
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