The bar chart showed the percentage of school children learning to play four different musical instruments (violin, guitar, piano, drums) in 3 years 2005, 2010, 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given chart illustrates the
percentage
of pupils learning to play violin, guitar, piano and drums in 3 different years.
Overall
, the percentage
of piano and guitar rose significantly, on the contrary
, the figure for violin dropped, whilst the percentage
of drums remained steady.
Looking at the details, the figure for piano and guitar in 2005 were
approximately 10%, after which they experienced a huge increase up to 20% in 2010, which was followed by a dramatic growth in 2015 reaching a peak of about 40%.
With regards to drums, the Change the verb form
was
percentage
maintain
the same level in all 3 years, Correct subject-verb agreement
maintains
leveling
off at about 5%. Change the spelling
levelling
However
, the percentage
of violin
differ from others by seeing a downward trend. The Fix the agreement mistake
violins
percentage
was approximately 10% until 2015 when it come
down to nearly 5%.Wrong verb form
came
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