The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph depicts information about the number of
Indian's
and Change noun form
Indian
Chinese
people, also
the predicted population growth during a 50-year period, from 2000 to 2050.
Rephrase
as well as
Overall
, what stands out from graph
is thatCorrect article usage
the graph
Change noun form
Indian
Indian
's people shows
an upward trend, Correct subject-verb agreement
show
while
chinese
people Change the capitalization
Chinese
has
a downward trend.
Regarding Change the verb form
have
Chinese
population, despite starting Correct article usage
the Chinese
around
1.2 Change preposition
at around
billions
in 2000, Change to singular
billion
this
figure increased sharply, reaching nearly 1.5 billions
in the middle of 2020. Change to singular
billion
Following
this
, there is a slightly
decrease in the number of Change the adverb
slight
Chinese
citizens, with 1.4 billions
Change to singular
billion
in
the end of the period.
In terms of Change the preposition
at
Correct article usage
the Indian's
Indian's
population,it can be seen clearly from the graph Change noun form
Indian
is
that the trend of Unnecessary verb
apply
Indian's
citizens shows a continuous increase throughout the period, starting at 1.0 Change noun form
Indian
billions
and ending Change to singular
billion
by1.6
Change preposition
at by1.6
billions
.Change to singular
billion
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