The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The Bar Graph compares
number
of males and females of various ages from Australia who exercise regularly in the year 2010. The unit is measured in percentage.
Change the article
a number
the number
Overall
, males above the age
of 25 were predominantly more engaged in physical exercise as compared to the
females. Correct article usage
apply
While
, it is opposite
for those below 25 Correct article usage
the opposite
age
where,
females Remove the comma
apply
are exercising
regularly.
In the beginning, from the Wrong verb form
exercise
age
of 15 to 44, there is an exponential growth from 48% to 53% in the numbers
of men actively involved in regular Fix the agreement mistake
number
workout
but, Fix the agreement mistake
workouts
on the other hand
, women showed a drop from 53% to 40% for the same.
In the age
group of 35 and above though, before dropping to 46%, the numbers remain stable at 53% for men in the age
group of 45-64. But, for women in
Change preposition
on
Correct article usage
the contrary
contrary
there was a rise in the number from 40% to 55% in the year 2010.Add a comma
contrary,
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