The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree courses. The table shows the salaries of the  anthropologists in work after five years.

 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the six distinguished career options that anthropology undergraduates participated in after concluding their tertiary program. The table displays the wages of anthropologists who have been working for five years. Wages are measured in dollars and job categories in percentages.
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, it can be seen that a majority, meaning over half of the graduates ended up securing a full-time profession after university.
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, it is evidently noticed that the proportion of anthropologists with higher ranges of income well exceeds the figure for those in the lower income brackets after five years of work.
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, it is clearly observed that 52% of graduates secured a full-time job, 15% landed
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a part-time career and 12% couldn't find an occupation. Meanwhile, the destination of 8% is unknown, other 8% are doing full-time post-graduate study and only 5% work part-time
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studying a post-graduate course.
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, an overwhelming majority of freelance consultants meaning 80% of them earn above 75,000 dollars with half of them receiving more than 100,000.
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, the salary of 80% of those working in the government sector is again 75,000 or more,
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time 50% earn more than 100, 000. The percentage of higher wages was reduced to 55% for those occupying positions in the private sector and only 30% received more than 100,000 dollars after five years of being employed.
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