The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
This
report derives from the maps which enumerate the recent changes in the site of Lynwich college
between 2006 and the present.
A glance at the illustrations clearly Capitalize word
College
reveal
that the Change the verb form
reveals
overall
predilections encountered the convenient transition and sophistication especially
in a sports section. Plus, the cafeteria has opened Add the comma(s)
, especially
at
the middle of the region and students can now use Change preposition
in
a
transportation.
To be specific, in comparison to the past, the area now possesses more athletic sectors including the sports centre which is located on the east side of the school connected to the cafeteria. Remove the article
apply
Also
, the former sports field was larger than the one from today, the parking lot also
underwent a reduction of its size. This
parking lot space divided
into two parts, comprising the car park and the bike storage.
Add a missing verb
is divided
Furthermore
, the previous library has been converted into the sport
centre, so the library moved to the west-southern part of the campus which is connected with the two college buildings.
Similar to Change the noun form
sports
earlier
arrangement, the current design still includes the university buildings with the same location.Add an article
the earlier
an earlier
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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