The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
This
report derives from the maps which enumerate the recent changes in the site of Lynwich
college
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College
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between 2006 and the present. A glance at the illustrations clearly
reveal
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reveals
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that the
overall
predilections encountered the convenient transition and sophistication
especially
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, especially
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in a sports section. Plus, the cafeteria has opened
at
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the middle of the region and students can now use
a
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apply
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transportation. To be specific, in comparison to the past, the area now possesses more athletic sectors including the sports centre which is located on the east side of the school connected to the cafeteria.
Also
, the former sports field was larger than the one from today, the parking lot
also
underwent a reduction of its size.
This
parking lot space
divided
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into two parts, comprising the car park and the bike storage.
Furthermore
, the previous library has been converted into the
sport
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centre, so the library moved to the west-southern part of the campus which is connected with the two college buildings. Similar to
earlier
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the earlier
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arrangement, the current design still includes the university buildings with the same location.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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