The map illustrates the town of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps show how a village
which
called Stakeford has devolved over the Correct pronoun usage
apply
last
eighty years .Linking Words
Overall
, the maps show the difference between 1930 and 2010 and what has changed there.
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To begin
with, in the 1930s,there was some farmland in the north and west of town.Surrounding the road,there were located some shops and more places for gardens. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the road for the garden and the bridge was closer than in 2010. Linking Words
Moreover
, some of the buildings were swapped for their structure .
The second plan illustrates that the river stoked and the overpass stayed the same, Linking Words
how
it was before .Correct word choice
as
For instance
, the bridge and post office Linking Words
which
were located East of Correct pronoun usage
apply
township
.Add an article
the township
a township
Also
, the large house returned to the retirement home.And all of the farmland and shops were disappeared .Linking Words
However
,in 2010 years the number of post offices increased.And a total of stores joined after a few years.Linking Words
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