The table below gives information about the values of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the values of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table depicts information about the
number
of New Zealand's
kiwi
that were exported to different five countries including Japan, China, Mexico, Russia, and Saudia Arabia during a two-year period, from 2010 to 2012.
Overall
, what stands out from the table is that the largest
number
of
kiwi
exported from New Zealand was to Japan,
whereas
the country that imported the lowest
number
was Saudi Arabia over the period given. Regarding the highest values, it can be seen clearly from the table
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a huge increase in the
number
of New Zealand's
kiwi
exported to both Japan and China, beginning in 2010, with $271,100,000,00 and $74,900,000,00 and ending in 2012, with $325,300,000,00 and $94,000,000,00 respectively.
However
, the value of
kiwi
that Russia imported grew sharply by more
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60,000,00
in
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each year. In terms of other countries, despite starting at $290,000,00 in 2010, in 2012,
this
figure decreased quickly to $82,000,00.
In contrast
, there was a fluctuation in the
number
of
kiwi
exported to Mexico, reaching
at
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$3,300,000,00
in
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the end of the period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, kiwi with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • export values
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuations
  • trends
  • consistent growth
  • overall trends
  • significant
  • notable patterns
  • highest export values
  • lowest export values
  • year to year
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