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Task-1 Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. • Introduce yourself • Describe problems you are facing because of this • Suggest solutions

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
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 letter to express my grave concern, for the problems faced by our residents
due to
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construction
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the construction
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 of your new venture across the street. I am Pranav Dhawan, building manager of the apartments adjacent. After being notified of
this
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 matter through various people in
written
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writing
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 and verbally expressing their discomfort, I had to reach
you
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out.
To begin
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 with,
this
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 office project has led to
rapid
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a rapid
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 increase in noise pollution in the area and to add
into
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to
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 the problem of parking,
majority
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the majority
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 of
cite
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site
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 workers park in our spots or visitor spots causing
a
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chaos.
Moreover
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, your initial notice only mentioned closing the main entrance road for 6 hours, but I hate to inform you that it’s been closed for 12-13 hours daily, adversely affecting
residents
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residents'
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 commute. We can easily solve these problems without involving the city officials . I can assure you about the parking issue by allowing them to park near our building’s park and for the noise pollution can you ask them not to use heavy
equipment’s
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 during late evening or night time .As far as
for
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the road closures if we are informed prior and they are done for short hauls , it can help the residents plan their travel comfortably. As
law-abiding
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a law-abiding
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 citizen, I request your immediate attention towards the concerns vindicated above and resolve them in a timely manner .Hope to hear from you soon! Yours sincerely, Pranav Dhawan.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for greater clarity. This helps in maintaining better organization and coherence.
task achievement
Provide more specific and actionable suggestions or extend on the existing ones to strengthen your task response.
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The letter begins with a clear introduction, providing context and the purpose of the letter, which gives the reader a clear understanding from the start.
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The tone is polite and formal, appropriate for the context of addressing a concern to a manager.
coherence cohesion
The letter ends with a clear closing statement, reinforcing the need for action and establishing a polite tone.

Contractions

Formal and informal language refers to using different forms of language in different settings.

In informal writing, you can use contractions such as I’ll and Сan’t.

In formal writing, you should write I will and Can not.

Do not use exclamation mark in formal writing, but you can use it in informal writing.

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