The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided intot three categories , from 1995-2002 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of time people spent on telephone conversations using three different categories, including local, national and international and mobiles which were fixed lines in the UK between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
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, it's clear that local calls were controlled throughout the given
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,
while
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national and international calls and mobiles increased in the specified
period
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.
To begin
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with, in 1995, the amount of time in local calls was just above 70, and it expanded year by year and
finally
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, it
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its peak of 90 in 1999. Next
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, it showed a significant
decreased
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over the
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and became in line with its start point in 2002. Regarding the other type of communication popularity, the national and international and mobile calls were raised over a certain
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with an amount of 35 and approximately 2 respectively.
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, in 2002, they obtained their peak point with 60 and about 45 respectively.
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