An organisation has given an advertisement for part time volunteering job for local children. Write a letter to the administrator of the organisation in your letter introduce yourself Why you think you are suitable for this. Job State when you will be able to join

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Hello, dear sir/madam. My name is Anastassia, I'm

pensioner

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a pensioner

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, with more than 25 years

experience

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of experience

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in nursing. I have seen your advertising about volunteering with local

children

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apply

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social media. I think it's the perfect idea to

acquainted

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acquaint

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the neighbours and support the weak families. I hope I'll have an opportunity to participate in

this

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amazing project. I have a lot of experience with toddlers, I had grown up

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with 3

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children

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, and I have 5 grandchildren.

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, I have a license in medical dogs, and both of my dogs are therapy dogs. We want to suggest our help

fot

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apply

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to the local

children

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- dog therapy in small groups,

furthermore

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, I can do it privately with the

children

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who need it. Of course, I will do it

free

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for free

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. So, if you think that it would be useful for our community, let me know, please Looking forward to your message. Best regards. Anastassia.

anastasiaFri Aug 09 2024

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grammar

Ensure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct. For example, 'It's the perfect idea to acquainted the neighbours and support the weak families' should be 'It’s a perfect idea to get acquainted with the neighbors and support families in need.'

content development

Consider expanding on why your experience with children and therapy dogs makes you particularly well-suited for this role.

task response

You clearly introduce yourself and outline your relevant experience.

greeting and closing

You close the letter politely and express a clear interest in the project.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

153 words

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