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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Writing a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: • say where you think you left the papers • explain why they are so important • tell the manager what you want him/her to do

#hotel #home #papers #manager
Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing
this
 letter because of regarding the meeting held at your hotel
last
 week.
In
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At
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that
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the
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 end of
meeting
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the meeting
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thay
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that
 day I
forget
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 some important documents. After the meeting, I went to the toilet with my documents and at that time, my driver came quickly. I guess I was in a hurry and forgot about it. They are very important documents for me. If my boss finds out about my loss, he will definitely fire me.
This
 will be a big shock for me as I recently took out a home loan. I need money to pay each month. That's why, I need to work and earn money. You understand how much I need
this
 document and I want you to search for it through your assistants. If it will
be find
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, I would ask you to send it to me by taxi. I looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully, Shabnam
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grammar
Ensure to proofread your letter to correct grammar and spelling errors. For instance, 'I forget' should be 'I forgot' and 'I looking forward' should be 'I am looking forward'.
task achievement
Provide more specific details on where you left the papers, for instance, 'I believe I left the documents on the sink in the restroom near the lobby.' This will help in a faster recovery of your papers.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for the addressed audience.
coherence
You have maintained clear paragraphs for different points: mentioning where you left the papers, explaining their importance, and making a request to the manager.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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