You recently attended a meeting at the hotel.When you returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter •say where think you left the papers •explain why they are so important •tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to apply for a manager in your hotel.Because
of
I forgot my important Change preposition
apply
papers
at your hotel.I hope you will look into this
letter.
I think so, I left the papers
on the table in the hotel's waiting room.Because,
I was in the waiting room before the meeting.
These Remove the comma
apply
papers
are very important.Because,
they were my personal documents and among them were documents of my Remove the comma
apply
house
.
I would like to receive the papers
this
evening.Because,
I want to sell my Remove the comma
apply
house
tomorrow and for that
I really need the Add a comma
that,
papers
of
the Change preposition
for
house
and my personal documents.
If possible, I want you to find my papers
and bring them to my house
.
I look forward hearing
from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Xudoyberdiyeva SevinchChange preposition
to hearing
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language
Improve language accuracy by avoiding minor grammatical errors. For instance, 'Because of I forgot' should be 'because I forgot.'
detail
Consider adding more specific details. For example, mention the exact meeting or the nature of the personal documents to enhance clarity.
tone
The letter has a clear and polite tone, which is appropriate for the context.
structure
Each paragraph covers a single idea, which helps to maintain clarity and coherence.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.