The diagram below shows how oil is expected in use of production of perfume

The following diagram represents how

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is used as a part of perfume production.

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, it can be clearly observed that it

comprised

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with

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four key processes: heating, vapourization, condensation, and

seperation

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separation

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, it is interesting to note that they applied the basic knowledge of sciences, especially in terms of temperature and density. Starting with heating as the first step, the fire boiled up the

water

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in a big large flask. When the

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reached

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its maximum boiling point, it will generate

a

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steam that

flow

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above the

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and

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through along the pipeline.

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,

this

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stage

known

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as Vapourization, as the steam undergoes

the a

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rectangular

tank

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filled with aromatic plants in order to fuse with desirable scents and

created

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a

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steam with

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vapor

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.

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condensation, the product from

this

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phase

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to the spiral and spring-like pipeline called condenser on the top which

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inside the two distinct

temperature

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water

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the water

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tank

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. The heated products release

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heat

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traveling

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down to

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level, the warmer

water

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stay

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on the top and

pumped

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out of the

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whereas

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the cooler

water

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is pumped inside to

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it. Eventually,

this

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process

turn

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a

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steams

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into liquid form, making it

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water

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mixed with essential

oil

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.

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, the mixture will flow to the

seperator

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separator

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which will

seperate

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separate

the essential

oil

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out of the hydrolat or aromatic

water

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. Generally,

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is much denser making it float on the top of the

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which is easy to distinguish it from

water

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and pumped out through a connected tube.