The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The three maps depict significant changes which have happened in the
area
of Queen Mary Hospital in three several years such
as 1960, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, the area
had changed considerably with the changing of the buildings such
as shopping centre
and pharmacy.
Regarding Correct article usage
the nourth
nourth
side, it is interesting to note that there had been a Correct your spelling
north
redevelpment
of Correct your spelling
redevelopment
development
shopping
Add an article
the shopping
centre
into cancer Fix the agreement mistake
centres
centre
and Fix the agreement mistake
centres
pharmace
in 1980. Correct your spelling
pharmacy
However
, cancer
Add an article
the cancer
centre
was enlarged by relocated
nursing Add an article
the relocated
school
and takes
that Wrong verb form
took
area
in 2000.
In terms of south
side,there used to be Add an article
the south
a
farmland in the southwest of the Remove the article
apply
area
in 1960, but by 1980, the farmland had been removed and replaced by a nursing school
. In contrast
, by 2000, a notable change occurred with the nursing school
and car park being reduced in size, and the nursing school
was relocated near the car park.Submitted by alharrasialanood7 on
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