The table shows the percentage of people with mobile phones who use various features on their phone between 2006 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table depicts data on the proportion of
residenta
who used Correct your spelling
residents
resident
smart phones
with varied applications on their phone, observed for Correct your spelling
smartphones
4-year
period from 2006 to 2010.
Add an article
a 4-year
the 4-year
According to
the data, the phone's feature
to make calls was the highest feature
that use
by residents in 4 Wrong verb form
was used
year
, it almost reached Change to a plural noun
years
perfect
number Correct article usage
a perfect
on
100%. Change preposition
of
Furthermore
, sending and receive
text messages was the second greatest figure Wrong verb form
receiving
that
used by residents Correct pronoun usage
apply
although
it grew slowly at
73% in 2006, 75% and 79% respectively, every 2 Change preposition
to
years
later, followed by take
photo Correct article usage
the take
feature
that increased 5
% each year and reached 76% at Change preposition
by 5
last
.
On the other hand
, the proportions
of Fix the agreement mistake
proportion
citizen
who used Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
play
games, play music, and Fix the infinitive
to play
record
video
were below 50% during the 4 Fix the agreement mistake
videos
years
stages. Meanwhile, there was a
incline from 0% used Change the article
an
record
Add the particle
to record
video
then
rose moderately to 9%, and peaked at 35% in 2008. Nevertheless
, this
record
video
outraced
by the Add a missing verb
was outraced
feature
of search
the internet, which started with none of Wrong verb form
searching
residents
Add an article
the residents
use
Wrong verb form
using
thi
Correct your spelling
this
the
feature
in 2006, then
inclined significantly to 41% and 73% only in the 2 years
separation.
In conclusion, at the end
of the phase, more than a half percentages
of Replace the word
per cent
Add an article
the citizen
citizen
Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
were
used features Unnecessary verb
apply
such
as make
calls, Wrong verb form
making
take
photos, Wrong verb form
taking
send
and Verb problem
apply
receive
text messages. Wrong verb form
receiving
wherease
under 50% of citizens were used Correct your spelling
where
play
games, Wrong verb form
to playing
play
music, and Wrong verb form
playing
record
Replace the word
recording
video
during during a phase of 4 years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words feature, years, record, video with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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