You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to restaurantʼs manager. On your letter • explain that you would like to apply for the job • give some details of any relevant experience that you have • specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear

sir

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madam

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Madam

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, Iʼm Jasmina and Iʼm writing about to the

restaurant

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ʼs manager. I recently noticed a local

restaurant

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that was offering a part-time

job

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Iʼm

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I am

student

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a student

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at the university. I need

part-time

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a part-time

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job

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because I have some problems with money. After

universityʼs

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university

classes

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classes,

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I feel bored. Sometimes I think

studentʼs

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student

life is boring and hard. I think I can

everything

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do everything

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for example

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I can wash the dishes and mop the floor and waiter. You know that

live

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in Tashkent is

the

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apply

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difficult I want to help my family. Because my

family

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family is

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poor. And sometimes my parents can't send me money. If I

would work

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worked

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in your

restaurant

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I have some money and I would not bored. After

universityʼs

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university

classes

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classes,

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I feel bored. Sometimes I think

studentʼs

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student

life is boring and hard. I should only work in

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restaurant

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a restaurant

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or cafe. Specify the

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weekdays

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week days

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weekdays

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and 17:00 p.m 22:00 pm times that would suit me. I can work in

restaurant

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only week days because I have another

job

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for other days. I believe

that is

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a profession that does not pose any danger for girls. I need to find a very good

job

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because nowadays there are many dangerous jobs that are dangerous for girls. Jasmina Your faithfully,

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure your letter follows a clear and logical structure. Try to keep related information in the same paragraph. For instance, dedicate one paragraph to explain why you want the job, another for detailing your experience, and another for the hours you are available to work.

Task Achievement

Make sure to proofread your letter for grammar and clarity. This can enhance readability and make a better impression.

Coherence and Cohesion

The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal job application letter.

Task Achievement

You have provided a complete response to each part of the task, explaining why you want the job, detailing your experience, and specifying your availability.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

208 words

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