You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to restaurantʼs manager. On your letter • explain that you would like to apply for the job • give some details of any relevant experience that you have • specify the days and times that would suit you

Dear
sir
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or
madam
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Madam
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, Iʼm Jasmina and Iʼm writing about to the
restaurant
ʼs manager. I recently noticed a local
restaurant
that was offering a part-time
job
.
Iʼm
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I am
student
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a student
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at the university. I need
part-time
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a part-time
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job
because I have some problems with money. After
universityʼs
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university
classes
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classes,
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I feel bored. Sometimes I think
studentʼs
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student
life is boring and hard. I think I can
everything
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do everything
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for example
I can wash the dishes and mop the floor and waiter. You know that
live
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in Tashkent is
the
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apply
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difficult I want to help my family. Because my
family
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family is
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poor. And sometimes my parents can't send me money. If I
would work
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worked
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in your
restaurant
I have some money and I would not bored. After
universityʼs
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university
classes
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classes,
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I feel bored. Sometimes I think
studentʼs
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student
life is boring and hard. I should only work in
restaurant
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a restaurant
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or cafe. Specify the
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weekdays
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week days
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weekdays
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and 17:00 p.m 22:00 pm times that would suit me. I can work in
restaurant
only week days because I have another
job
for other days. I believe
that is
a profession that does not pose any danger for girls. I need to find a very good
job
because nowadays there are many dangerous jobs that are dangerous for girls. Jasmina Your faithfully,
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your letter follows a clear and logical structure. Try to keep related information in the same paragraph. For instance, dedicate one paragraph to explain why you want the job, another for detailing your experience, and another for the hours you are available to work.
Task Achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for grammar and clarity. This can enhance readability and make a better impression.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal job application letter.
Task Achievement
You have provided a complete response to each part of the task, explaining why you want the job, detailing your experience, and specifying your availability.

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