You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to restaurantʼs manager. On your letter • explain that you would like to apply for the job • give some details of any relevant experience that you have • specify the days and times that would suit you
Dear
sir
or Capitalize word
Sir
madam
,
Iʼm Jasmina and Iʼm writing about to the Capitalize word
Madam
restaurant
ʼs manager. I recently noticed a local restaurant
that was offering a part-time job
. Iʼm
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I am
student
at the university. I need Correct article usage
a student
part-time
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a part-time
job
because I have some problems with money. After universityʼs
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university
classes
I feel bored. Sometimes I think Add a comma
classes,
studentʼs
life is boring and hard.
I think I can Correct your spelling
student
everything
Add a missing verb
do everything
for example
I can wash the dishes and mop the floor and waiter. You know that live
in Tashkent is Wrong verb form
living
the
difficult I want to help my family. Because my Correct article usage
apply
family
poor. And sometimes my parents can't send me money. If I Add a verb
family is
family was
would work
in your Wrong verb form
worked
restaurant
I have some money and I would not bored. After universityʼs
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university
classes
I feel bored. Sometimes I think Add a comma
classes,
studentʼs
life is boring and hard.
I should only work in Correct your spelling
student
restaurant
or cafe. Specify the Correct article usage
a restaurant
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weekdays
week days
and 17:00 p.m 22:00 pm times that would suit me. I can work in Correct your spelling
weekdays
restaurant
only week days because I have another job
for other days. I believe that is
a profession that does not pose any danger for girls. I need to find a very good job
because nowadays there are many dangerous jobs that are dangerous for girls.
Jasmina
Your faithfully,Submitted by omondavlat91 on
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Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure your letter follows a clear and logical structure. Try to keep related information in the same paragraph. For instance, dedicate one paragraph to explain why you want the job, another for detailing your experience, and another for the hours you are available to work.
Task Achievement
Make sure to proofread your letter for grammar and clarity. This can enhance readability and make a better impression.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal job application letter.
Task Achievement
You have provided a complete response to each part of the task, explaining why you want the job, detailing your experience, and specifying your availability.