The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the people that do not have a
job
to work spent time
doing some activities for the last
year.
In general, both men
and women
spent their time
on housework
, shopping and job
hunting in the morning.However
, in the afternoon , men
watch TV and women
also
spend time
doing the housework
.
Having looked the
chart for more details, Change preposition
at the
it is clear that
, 22% of men
in the morning spent time
shopping the most, job
hunting and housework
had slightly lower percentages, 19% and 20%. There are three main activities that men
spend time
at
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on
Women
also
had 3 activities the same as men
, but housework
was the highest percentage with 49% ,which was much more than men
.
In the afternoon, it had a
slightly changed. Correct article usage
apply
Men
spent almost
Correct your spelling
most
time
watching TV with
14%, gardening, Change preposition
apply
job
hunting and visiting friends or relatives had nearly changed by about 12-13%. However
, women
still spent time
on housework
í the most with 21%.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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