The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the people that do not have a
job
to work spent
time
doing some activities for the
last
year. In general, both
men
and
women
spent their
time
on
housework
, shopping and
job
hunting in the morning.
However
, in the afternoon ,
men
watch TV and
women
also
spend
time
doing the
housework
. Having looked
the
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chart for more details,
it is clear that
, 22% of
men
in the morning spent
time
shopping the most,
job
hunting and
housework
had slightly lower percentages, 19% and 20%. There are three main activities that
men
spend
time
at
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.
Women
also
had 3 activities the same as
men
, but
housework
was the highest percentage with 49% ,which was much more than
men
. In the afternoon, it had
a
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slightly changed.
Men
spent
almost
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most
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time
watching TV
with
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14%, gardening,
job
hunting and visiting friends or relatives had nearly changed by about 12-13%.
However
,
women
still spent
time
on
housework
í the most with 21%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
Vocabulary: Replace the words job, time, men, women, housework with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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