The maps below show the changes that took place at a science and technology museum between 1996 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the maps
illustrates
the development Change the verb form
illustrate
in
a science and technology museum in 1996 and 2016
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of
overall
, it can be clearlz
seen that there is Correct your spelling
clearly
a
primary changes have been in both years Correct article usage
apply
inclouding
new facilities .
in 1996 , there Correct your spelling
including
was
writing desks in the southwest corner above , and under of it there was Correct subject-verb agreement
were
steam
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a steam
engine
exhibition
and diesel engine
exhibition
in the meddle
, and there was Correct your spelling
middle
cafe
beside the reception , and Correct article usage
a cafe
front
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in front
the
steam Change preposition
of the
engine
exhibition
and diesel engine
exhibition
there was a print room
and library ,and in outside there was i
a car Change the capitalization
I
park
took phenomenal
area from the entire land .
in 2016 , the writing desks Add an article
the phenomenal
have been
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were
to
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in
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the comuters
comuters
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room
and the library has been relocate
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relocating
relocated
to
beside the Change preposition
apply
comuters
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Comuters
room
and the cafe has been
converted to Wrong verb form
was
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a resturant
resturant
and the reception Correct your spelling
restaurant
restaurants
has been
increased in size and the print Wrong verb form
was
room
has been
replaced by Wrong verb form
was
digital
technology Correct article usage
a digital
room
, while
the small part on car park
made to bicycle park
, above the car park
, a VR room
and slolar
wind Correct your spelling
solar
room
have been added to place
.Add an article
the place
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words engine, exhibition, room, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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