The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar charts illustrate the proportion of male and female employees aged between 60 and 64 in
Belgium
, the USA
, Japan
, and Australia
from 1970 to 2000.
Overall
, men's proportions decreased significantly from 1970 to 2000 in all four countries. However
, the situation was slightly different for women. While
in Belgium
and Japan
, women between 60 and 64 employment rates
declined slightly from 1970 to 2000, the rates
rose slightly in the USA
and Australia
.
Male employee percentages dropped dramatically in Belgium
from 1970 to 2000 from 79% to 19%. In the USA
, it dropped slightly by 18% in 2000 while
In Japan
and Australia
, the same reduction in the rates
happened. Australia
lost almost one-half of their 60 to 64 employee proportions from 1970 to 2000 , and Japan
lost almost one-third.
Females aged between 60-64 percentages decreased insignificantly in both Japan
and Belgium
to become 40% and 7%, respectively, after they were 43% and 8%. A slight increase happened in Australia
and The US. Women between 60-64 employee rates
became 18% and 39% in Australia
and USA
, respectively in 2000, after they were 16% and 36%.Submitted by
on
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