The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons hwre relavant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons hwre relavant.
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The pie chart illustrates six different things that Anthropology graduates did after finishing their university.
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, the table compares the incomes that anthropologists can make after five years of working in that field. Looking from an
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perspective, it is readily apparent that more than half of anthropology graduates work full-time.
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, most of the anthropologists make more than $75,000 after five years of work. Looking at the pie chart,
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%52 of anthropologist graduates work full time, only %5 of them participated in full-time postgrad study.
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, %15 of them are unemployed, and a slightly smaller percentage, %12, have unknown status. The percentages of part-time workers and part-time workers who participated in postgrad study are the same, both at %8.
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the table, %5 of freelance consultants and government sector employers make between $25,000 and $50,000,
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15% of them make between $50,000 and $75,000.
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%40 of freelance consultants and only %30 of the employees in private companies earn more than $100,000, the percentage for government sector employees is %50, making it the highest among the group. It is worth mentioning that %45 of workers in private companies earn below $75,000, which is more than the other two groups.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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