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The charts show the average velocity of traffic over a fifty-year period with a forecast for the future and the amount of urban areas by country.

The charts show the average velocity of traffic over a fifty-year period with a forecast for the future and the amount of urban areas by country.
#show #velocity #traffic #period #forecast #future #amount #areas #country
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The graph depicts how changes the number of
publication
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 during the given timeframe.
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, there is a rising trend all over
period
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,
exception
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 between 2010 and 2016. Looking at the charts in more detail, it is evident that the level of publications increased slowly from less
of
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 15 in 2001 to
the
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 low of 30 in 2007. the status
of
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average velocity of traffic fluctuate around 30 for 6 years, until 2016. Regarding
to
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the forecast, it seems likely there will
a
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climb in the number of the typical velocity of traffic about twofold, from 30 to just over 60. After 2019
this
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 feather will peak
the
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 highest level
the
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over 90,
will follow
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 by
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a slightly
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slightly
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 decrease to
roughtly
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roughly
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average velocity
  • traffic congestion
  • urban expansion
  • technological advancements
  • road infrastructure
  • car efficiency
  • traffic management systems
  • socioeconomic factors
  • vehicle ownership
  • economic growth
  • transport infrastructure
  • urban planning policies
  • sustainable transport solutions
  • public transit
  • cycling paths
  • smart traffic systems
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