The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
high ranked
countries for production and consumption of electricity in 2014 and considerate for ten different countries.
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high-ranked
Overall
, it is readily noticeable that the
China Correct article usage
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occupying
one of the highest countries in both Wrong verb form
occupies
producing
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production
consuming
. Replace the word
consumption
In contrast
, Korea whereas
the lowest.
According to
the chart, China was
represented above of 5,000 Unnecessary verb
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billion
kilowatts
in consuming
and Replace the word
consumption
producing
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production
then
United States came in second place Correct your spelling
the
whereas
the production was higher than consumption nearly
4,000 Change preposition
by nearly
billion
kilowatts
respectively. furthermore
, Russia and Japan were as same in both approximately above 1,000 billion
kilowatts
. In addition
to
, Russia has the same statistic with both exhaustion and output.
Consuming in India and Canada where less than producing by roughly two hundred. France, Brazil, Germany and Korea demonstrated Change preposition
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a steadily
steadily declined
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steady decline
of
figures. Germany where the only country Change preposition
in
consumption
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with consumption
was
exceeding production accounting for 56 Verb problem
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billion
kilowatts
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