The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000. Write a report describing the information in the graph below.

The graph below shows the fertility rate of women in different Gulf Countries from 1990 to 2000.

Write a report describing the information in the graph below.
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The provided bar chart serves as an insightful illustration of the
rate
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of
fertility
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in females in six countries (Bahrain, Kuwait, Qatar, Oman, S. Arabia, and UAE) over the span of a decade starting from 1990 to 2000. The
overall
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impression of the chart is that the
fertility
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rate
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was higher in 1990 as compared to
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2000. It is worth mentioning that
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Oman and Saudi are the countries with
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fertility
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rate
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rates
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in women.
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,
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Kuwait and Bahrain had the lowest
rate
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.
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with, Bahrain and Kuwait had almost
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rate
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in both the years (1990 and 2000), 3.5 and 2.5
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respectively
.
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, Qatar and UAE had similar
fertility
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rate
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in
year
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1990 i.e. a little over 4. But, in
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2000 UAE
fertility
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rate
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dropped significantly
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Qatar faced a slight drop. In
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1990, Oman had the highest
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of
fertility
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in women, peaking at 7
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8 women
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fertile, followed by Saudi Arabia at
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a 6.8
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percent
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per cent
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rate
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of
fertility
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. But, a decade later both the countries had exactly
same
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the same
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ratio of
fertility
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, fertility with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • trend
  • significant increase
  • significant decrease
  • Gulf countries
  • data
  • analyze
  • compare
  • overall
  • individual country
  • highlight
  • predict
  • period
  • rate changes
  • decline
  • rise
  • fluctuate
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