The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts illustrate information about the average proportion in four different meals of three types of nutrients, which brings problems to health if overeat.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is that,
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breakfast
for most Americans is healthy. While
the remaining meals are relatively unhealthy due to
the excessive intake of some substance
.
For the first graph, the largest Fix the agreement mistake
substances
part
of sodium is dinner, with a proportion of 43%. Followed by 29% (lunch), while
breakfast
and snacks occupy the smallest part
, both of them are 14%. With regards to the second graph, dinner takes up the largest part
of 37%, by contrast
, breakfast
is still the smallest part
, which is 16%. Lunch occupies 26%, which is bigger than 21% of snacks.
Take a look at the added sugar, the breakfast
only takes up 16%, while
snacks are approximately three times as much as that in the breakfast
. Meanwhile, lunch and dinner occupied almost the same, with about 20%.Submitted by 2575444164 on
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