The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given pie charts illustrate information about the average proportion in four different meals of three types of nutrients, which brings problems to health if overeat.
Overall
, what stands out from the graphs is thatLinking Words
,
generally speaking, Remove the comma
apply
the
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breakfast
for most Americans is healthy. Use synonyms
While
the remaining meals are relatively unhealthy Linking Words
due to
the excessive intake of some Linking Words
substance
.
For the first graph, the largest Fix the agreement mistake
substances
part
of sodium is dinner, with a proportion of 43%. Followed by 29% (lunch), Use synonyms
while
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breakfast
and snacks occupy the smallest Use synonyms
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, both of them are 14%. With regards to the second graph, dinner takes up the largest Use synonyms
part
of 37%, Use synonyms
by contrast
, Linking Words
breakfast
is still the smallest Use synonyms
part
, which is 16%. Lunch occupies 26%, which is bigger than 21% of snacks.
Take a look at the added sugar, the Use synonyms
breakfast
only takes up 16%, Use synonyms
while
snacks are approximately three times as much as that in the Linking Words
breakfast
. Meanwhile, lunch and dinner occupied almost the same, with about 20%.Use synonyms
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