The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The bar chart provides information about the percentages of journeys to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year.
Overall
, walking experienced a downward trend for every other mile, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
bus
usage showed an upward trend throughout the chart. Except for buses and walks, both bicycle and car rates had some fluctuations. For walks and bicycles, the rates have not changed for more than 5 Use synonyms
miles
.
The car rate was almost 10 Use synonyms
percent
in 1-2 Change the spelling
per cent
miles
, which is higher than the Use synonyms
bus
rate by around 0 Use synonyms
percent
. Unlike buses and cars, walking had the highest rate in the 0–1 mile range. Change the spelling
per cent
However
, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 20% in 2–5 Linking Words
miles
. Similar to walking, bicycles Use synonyms
also
experienced dips between 1-2 Linking Words
miles
and 2–5 Use synonyms
miles
, ranging from approximately 80% to nearly 50%.
The bar chart Use synonyms
also
illustrates that for journeys over 5 Linking Words
miles
, the Use synonyms
bus
is the best option, with nearly 70%. The other option for more than 5 Use synonyms
miles
is a car, which uses approximately 20%. After 1-2 Use synonyms
miles
, Use synonyms
bus
usage sharply peaks, ranging from 10% to about 70%.Use synonyms
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