The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The chart below gives information about the journey to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
The bar chart provides information about the percentages of journeys to school by children aged 11 to 16 in the UK in a year.
Overall
, walking experienced a downward trend for every other mile,
while
bus
usage showed an upward trend throughout the chart. Except for buses and walks, both bicycle and car rates had some fluctuations. For walks and bicycles, the rates have not changed for more than 5
miles
. The car rate was almost 10
percent
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per cent
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in 1-2
miles
, which is higher than the
bus
rate by around 0
percent
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per cent
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. Unlike buses and cars, walking had the highest rate in the 0–1 mile range.
However
, the figure showed a gradual decrease to about 20% in 2–5
miles
. Similar to walking, bicycles
also
experienced dips between 1-2
miles
and 2–5
miles
, ranging from approximately 80% to nearly 50%. The bar chart
also
illustrates that for journeys over 5
miles
, the
bus
is the best option, with nearly 70%. The other option for more than 5
miles
is a car, which uses approximately 20%. After 1-2
miles
,
bus
usage sharply peaks, ranging from 10% to about 70%.
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