This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about the proportion of recycled
materials
in various countries divided by
four types between 1980 to 2010. The unit measures in per Change preposition
into
cent
.
Overall
, the graph of recycled materials
fluctuated. In 1982, the highest number of recycled objects was paper
and cardboard about 65 per cent
. Glass
containers were the second-ranked number at 50 per cent
. In addition
, Aluminum cans were recycled in 1986 for the first time and their percentage was significantly small compared to paper
and glass
just around only 5 per cent
.
In 1990, when plastics were recycled for the first time about 5 per cent
. The number of paper
and glass
recycling declined slightly from 1986. In contrast
, the recycling percentage of Aluminium materials
gradually rose to 10 per cent
, which is double in the past. Moreover
, after the year 1994. There is an upward trend
in Aluminiums
, Correct your spelling
Aluminium
Glass
objects and plastics recycling. However
, paper
and cardboard material has a downward trend
in the same periods.
To sum up
, the 1982 to 2010 period. Paper
and cardboard have a downward trend
. Nevertheless
, Glass
containers, Aluminium packages and Plastics had an upward trend
.This
graph shows the proportion of four different materials
that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.Submitted by matty10
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Vocabulary: Replace the words materials, cent, paper, glass, trend with synonyms.
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