You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear
Sara
,
I am writing a complaint to the shop which supplied the equipment
. Because I have a problem with the equipment
. Currently, I am not using this equipments
. But why I do not know. Change the determiner
this equipment
these equipments
Also
Add a comma
Also,
this
Change the determiner
these
equipments
do not Correct your spelling
equipment
work
.
Actually, I think two weeks ago I bought equipment
for my home in Sara
's market. Especially, wash
Replace the word
washing
machine
, volunteer cleaning and Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
. At the moment, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Sara
said : you can use equipment
for 2 years or at least 1 year and if Add an article
the equipment
equipment
Correct article usage
the equipment
do
not Change the verb form
does
work
, you can contact me. I trusted Sara
's sentences and I bought equipment
. I used equipment
until yesterday. Correct article usage
the equipment
Currently
equipments are invalid for Add a comma
Currently,
work
. But , I am happy with how good the equipment
work
in 2 weeks. Correct subject-verb agreement
works
Also
, I did not think it would invalid
in 2 weeks. The Add a missing verb
be invalid
wash
machine is not able to squeeze the clothes, the vacuum cleaner is not able to clean the dust well and all the products in the refrigerator are melting.
I am sorry about Change the verb form
washing
this
situation.I want to return all the equipment
and I want you to give me a full refund. I entered this
store for the first time. I have never step
Change the verb form
stepped
a feet
again!
Yours sincerely,
Qobiljonova KamolaCorrect the article-noun agreement
feet
a foot
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coherence cohesion
Ensure all equipment issues and their effect on work are clearly described in a structured manner.
task achievement
Your tone could be more professional and less emotional to ensure the letter is taken seriously.
task achievement
You have addressed the key points required in the task prompt, which is excellent.
coherence cohesion
End your letter with a proper closing which is polite yet firm.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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