The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (COz) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (COz) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
As can be seen , the given line graph illustrates the average per-person carbon dioxide
emissions
in four different countries (
UK
,Sweeden,Italy and
portugal
Change the capitalization
Portugal
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)
Overall
, we can notice that the carbon dioxide
emissions
increased in two Portugal and Italy between 1967 and 2007
while
the average decreased in the other 2 countries (
UK
and Sweeden ). In the first two countries (Portugal and Italy )the average is increasing steadily as it was about 1.5M in 1967 , 3M in 1987 , clost to 5.5 in 1997 reaching about 5.7 in 2007 In portugal . In Italy there were 3 obvious points of averages , the first one was about 6.2 metric tonnes of CO2 in 1997 ,
while
the secong point was clost to 6.4m in 1987 . In the third one point it was about 7.8 in 2000. From 2000 to 2007 ,
emissions
continued at the same rate as before . In the other hand , the averade decreased in
UK
and Sweeden .Emitions in
UK
have been consistently and steadily declining . As it was about about 10.3 in 1977 , 10 in 1987 ending with 8.3 in 2007
while
in sweden
emissions
increased between 1967 to 1977 as it was 8.3
then
10.2 and
then
decreased in the following years , As it declined to 6.3m in 1987 and reached 5.8 in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, uk, m with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions
  • per capita
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • industrialization
  • environmental policy
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • climate change
  • mitigation efforts
  • emission levels
  • comparison
  • decade
  • environmental impact
  • greenhouse gases
  • sustainable development
  • regulatory measures
  • technological advancements
  • energy consumption
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