The supplied pie charts above represents the data collected in 1980 and 2000, about units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France
The pie charts show the
production
of electricity using five different fuel sources in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000.
In 1980, the largest source of electricity in Australia was coal, which made up half of the total production
at 50 units
. Both natural gas and oil contributed equally, with 20 units
each. Nuclear power accounted for the smallest share at 10 units
.
By 2000, coal production
increased significantly, making up the majority of electricity production
at 130 units
. Meanwhile, natural gas and oil dropped dramatically to only 2 units
each. Hydro power
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Hydropower
production
rose to 36 units
, becoming the second most important source. Nuclear power, however
, was no longer used, with its production
falling to zero.Submitted by chartakinnovation on
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