The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries in tonnes. Summarise the informantion by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
THE GRAPH, ILLUSTRATES THE AMOUNT OF TEA AND COFFEE IMPORTED BY FOUR DIFFERENT COUNTRIES, AND ITS MEASURING BY
TONNES
. THERE ARE 4 MAIN COUNTRIES THAT REPRESENTS
ON Wrong verb form
ARE REPRESENTED
BAR
CHART Correct article usage
THE BAR
IS
CANADA,Unnecessary verb
apply
US
,Correct article usage
THE US
UK
AND Correct article usage
THE UK
GERMANY
.
THE MOST, HIGH COUNTRY THAT USES TEA A LOT IS UK
THE GERMANY
HAS A LITTLE BIT LOWER THAN UK
FOR 300000 Correct article usage
THE UK
TONNES
. HOWEVER
, US AND CANADA SHOWING THE SAME HEIGHT IN TONNES
200000. THE MOST CHARMING STATE THAT USES COFFEE, IS GERMANY
AND THE OTHER ONES IS
SLIGHTLY LOWER THAN Correct subject-verb agreement
ARE
GERMANY
. US
TAKES 2 PLACE ON Correct article usage
THE US
BAR
CHART WITH 400000 Correct article usage
THE BAR
TONNES
THAN CANADA WITH FAIRLY LOWER THAN US AND THE LAST
COUNTRY THAT IS
NOT USING COFFEE A LOT IS UK
.Correct article usage
THE UK
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