The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The plan illustrates the sustainable procedure in which
plastic
bottles
are recycled.
Overall
, it can be seen that
bottles
go through several stages
such
as collecting, sorting, compressing and crushing before turning into pellets, and raw
material
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materials
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in order
to
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for
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various final items
be
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manufactured.
Firstly
,
plastic
bottles
are collected from trash cans
accross
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across
the city and
then
they are transferred by truck to
recycling
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the recycling
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center
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to be sorted in the third step of the process. Afterwards, they are compressed into square blocks like a cube before crushing mechanically and washing in the fifth stage, which
result
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in
plastic
pellets as the outcome of the sixth level of the process.
Secondly
, the tiny pellets which are the result of severe crushing by an automated machine are heated to produce raw material in the seventh stage of the cycle. After that, raw material is packaged and sealed before becoming ready to be shipped to manufacturing factories and workshops to produce various end-user items
such
as clothes, bags, pens, and
plastic
products
such
as
bottles
and containers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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