You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.In your letter • describe the problem with the equipment • explain how this problem is affecting your work • say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about
my
Change the word
the
equipment
for my job
.
Firstly
,there are lots of problems with my equipment
and it does not work.My new computer is work
properly. Change the verb form
is working
Furthermore
, my computer table is
broken when it Wrong verb form
was
supplied
and my printer's colour Add a missing verb
was supplied
were
mixed.Change the verb form
was
Also
I can not use Add a comma
Also,
this
equipment
for my job
.
Secondly
,these all problems will harmfull
my Correct your spelling
harm
job
.For
example
I can not get Add a comma
example,
good
salary and my work may decline. Add an article
a good
Also
I can not contract Add a comma
Also,
to
another famous company. I will get fired Change preposition
with
my
Change preposition
from my
job
and I can not improve my qualification
. Fix the agreement mistake
qualifications
Furthermore
, my director wil
Correct your spelling
will
changed
my Wrong verb form
change
job
.
If you refund my money fully I would be gratefull
or you can Correct your spelling
grateful
repaired
my Change the verb form
repair
all
Correct determiner usage
apply
equipment
.Also
you can change my Add a comma
Also,
equipment
to another one.Did not supplied
Wrong verb form
supply
equipment
because I want to go Correct article usage
the equipment
in
your company and get my all Change preposition
to
equipment
.
I look forward to hearing from you.My number : 944960528
Yours faithfully,
Rajabov AzizSubmitted by omondavlat91 on
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task achievement
The letter addresses all the points requested in the task, but more specific details about how the problems are affecting your work would strengthen the response.
coherence cohesion
Improve the logical structure by organizing your letter into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a single point (problem description, impact, and your request).
coherence cohesion
The salutation and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable for the context of a formal complaint.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite