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Discuss an instance where technology has enhanced your learning. How did technology change the way you learned or understood something?

The interface which has enhanced my learning is
Chat-gpt
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Chat-GPT
.Because now I can get the information
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 very short time
also
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 without moving
to
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 many places.
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the
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one important thing is that ,
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 I recently used chat-gpt picture
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format
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want
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 to type the text of the picture but by using chat-gpt it types the whole text from
picture
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technology
 helps me to learn and enhance new skills very easily.

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Provide more specific examples and details to support your points, demonstrating a deeper engagement with the topic.
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Ensure that each sentence is clear and comprehensive, providing more elaboration on your main points.
coherence and cohesion
Work on creating a clearer and more logical structure. Make sure each paragraph transitions smoothly into the next one.
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The topic is relevant and the use of a specific technological interface, Chat-GPT, is a good choice.
coherence and cohesion
The essay includes an introduction and a conclusion.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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