You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in 

Australian universities over a ten year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make 

comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words
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The provided bar graphs
illustrates
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data on the number of international and local
students
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admitted to
australian
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Australian
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universities
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in a decade starting from 2001 to 2010. The units are measured in numbers. The
overall
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impression of the chart is that
total
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the total
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number of local
students
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enrolled in
australian
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Australian
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universities
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were
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quite high in comparison to its counterpart overseas
students
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.
However
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,
graph
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the graph
a graph
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for overseas
students
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commencing university each year was elevating.
Conversely
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, it was erratic for local
students
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. As per the visual representation, around 100000
students
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came from different countries to study in
australian
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Australian
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universities
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in 2001 and the numbers surged each year and doubled by 2006.
Furthermore
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, an upward trend was observed in the following years
untill
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until
it reached its apex in 2009, by accepting 400000 international
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students
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application
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. On the
countrary
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contrary
, 180000 local
students
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enrolled themselves in the
universities
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around them, and the number rose drastically to 210000 approximately, before plunging to approximately 180000 again in 2006. the numbers stayed
stagnate
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stagnant
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for
rest
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the rest
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of the decade with little fluctuation in between.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, universities with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrolments
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • comparative analysis
  • surpassed
  • dominant
  • fluctuations
  • stability
  • growth
  • decline
  • significant
  • notable
  • shift
  • influence
  • predict
  • impact
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