The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Bar Chart displays the number of
hours
on average that four different countries spent on relaxing activities during vacations in Greece 8/2019.
Overall
, Chinese
and Americans
spend more hours
reading books and going to the beach
, Turkish
and Correct word choice
while Turkish
Brazilians
like to go to the beach
. All the countries used fewer hours
to visiting
new places, being Wrong verb form
visit
Americans
and Turkish
who used more hours
to this
activity.
Chinese
tourists spent 8 hours
reading books, almost doubled
the number of Replace the word
double
Americans
that used 5 hours
, Brazilians
and Turkish
use 4 hours
. Brazilians
stayed for
the Change preposition
on
beach
6
Change preposition
for 6
hours
just 1 hour more than Turkish
people who spent 5 hours
and double of the number Chinese
that went to the beach
for 3 hours
. Americans
spent 4 hours
relaxing at the beach
.
Americans
and Turkish
spent the same amount of hours
visiting places with 3 hours
each, tripled Chinese
with 1 hour and doubled Brazilians
with only 2 hours
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