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The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows the percentage of women working in 6 countries in 1960, 1970 and 1980. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on th e main features and make comparisons where relevant
#percentage #women #countries #summarise #information #e #features #comparisons
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bar chart illustrates the
amount
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number
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 of women enrolling
into
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on
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 higher education after
school
 in the
year
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years
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 1970 and 2005 for 5 different countries. In the
year
 1970, only a small proportion of women pursue higher
degree
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degrees
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 after
school
 in
Japan
.
Whereas
, in
Canada
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Canada,
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 60 % of
female
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the female
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 population continued their education after graduating from
school
. Germany
being
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 the second highest with more than 50%, followed by
USA
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the USA
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 and
UK
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the UK
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 at 40% and less than 40% respectively. An increase in female
school
 leavers going into higher education is exhibited in the
year
 2005. Canada and
UK
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the UK
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at
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are at
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 the top of the list with 60% followed by
USA
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the USA
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 and Germany with more than 50% and
Japan
 with 40%. A notable change
has
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occured
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occurred
 in
UK
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the UK
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 and
Japan
 in the
year
 2005. A steep increase of 20% or more
females
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in females
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 started attending universities.
However
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japan
 stayed at the bottom of the provided bar chart in both
the
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years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, year, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • decade
  • increase/decrease
  • compare/contrast
  • significant
  • socio-economic factors
  • progressive
  • minimal changes
  • hypothesize
  • global developments
  • regional developments
  • influence
  • trend analysis
  • workforce participation
  • historical context
  • labor market
  • gender gap
  • employment policies
  • cultural norms
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