Most high-level positions in comapanies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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are

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50

percent

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women

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of women

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in the whole workforce, most higher

positions

in organizations

are hold

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are held

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by males. Some argue that organizations should allocate a certain percentage of higher

positions

for

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women

. I completely disagree with

this

viewpoint, because higher

positions

require high-level skills and expertise, and if it is decided by gender, it would not be appropriate to the

position

. To start with, every

position

requires its own skills and knowledge, and if any

employee

held

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the

position

without achieving those skills, the organization will ultimately suffer. In terms of higher

position

,

this

statement is more appropriate. If an

employee

, who is not eligible for the place, will not perform well, will

produce

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a lot of mistakes, and can not supervise his inferiors properly. In Bangladesh,

for example

, a multinational company named Oslo

,

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recruited an

employee

for

high-level

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position

based on gender, and because of her irresponsibility, the company encountered a huge loss.

Therefore

, I believe that

positions

should be given to that particular

employee

, who is eligible.

Moreover

, if

women

can

held

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50

percent

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of the job market through their hard work and dedication, I believe, they can easily reach

to

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any high level-

position

if they want. For that, they do not need any extra favour of being

women

. In India, most higher places in several companies are

holding

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by

women

and they reach

to

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their destination by their hard work and willpower.

Hence

, if a woman believes, she can compete with her male counterparts to achieve a

position

, she can do that

of

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her own.

To conclude

, allocating 50

percentage

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of high places for

women

would not be beneficial for any company, rather believing in

women

's capability, and encouraging them to compete will help to find the most eligible person for the

position

.