Most high-level positions in comapanies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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women

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of women

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in the whole workforce, most higher

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in organizations

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by males. Some argue that organizations should allocate a certain percentage of higher

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for

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women

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. I completely disagree with

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viewpoint, because higher

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require high-level skills and expertise, and if it is decided by gender, it would not be appropriate to the

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. To start with, every

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requires its own skills and knowledge, and if any

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held

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the

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without achieving those skills, the organization will ultimately suffer. In terms of higher

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,

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statement is more appropriate. If an

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, who is not eligible for the place, will not perform well, will

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a lot of mistakes, and can not supervise his inferiors properly. In Bangladesh,

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, a multinational company named Oslo

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recruited an

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for

high-level

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position

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based on gender, and because of her irresponsibility, the company encountered a huge loss.

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, I believe that

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should be given to that particular

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, who is eligible.

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, if

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can

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of the job market through their hard work and dedication, I believe, they can easily reach

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any high level-

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if they want. For that, they do not need any extra favour of being

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. In India, most higher places in several companies are

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by

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and they reach

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their destination by their hard work and willpower.

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, if a woman believes, she can compete with her male counterparts to achieve a

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, she can do that

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her own.

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, allocating 50

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of high places for

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would not be beneficial for any company, rather believing in

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's capability, and encouraging them to compete will help to find the most eligible person for the

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.