The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar diagram shows the total
percentage
of films released during the period between 1996 and 2006 and
also
shows the total
percentage
of ticket sales in a country.
Overall
, the bar diagram shows the total
percentage
for the
years
1996 and 2006 during
this
time Drama,
Comedy
,
Fantasy
and romance-based
movies
were released in theatres and the sale of
tickets
was
also
mentioned in the bar chart. During the period of 1996 and 2006 drama based
movies
were released high in numbers all over, the theatres around the country with 26 per
cent
in 1996 and 35 per
cent
in 2006.
Comedy
movies
are a bit lower than dramas with a
percentage
of 20 and 25.
Fantasy
movies
are lower than
Comedy
with the
percentage
of 12 and 16. The
last
movie
is Romance-based
movies
are lower than all the
movies
with a
percentage
of 7 and it was the same for both
years
. The sale of
tickets
all over the country during the
years
1996 and 2006 with their
percentage
. Drama
movie
tickets
were 16 and 17 per
cent
with a 1per
cent
difference.
Comedy
movie
tickets
were high for both
years
with 20 and 23 per
cent
. As usual
Fantasy
and Romance-based
movie
ticket selling percentages were very low for both
years
with
fantasy
3 and 7 per
cent
for romance 5 and 2 per
cent
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, years, comedy, fantasy, movies, tickets, cent, movie with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.

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  • depict
  • significant increases/decreases
  • highlighting
  • drawing comparisons
  • discrepancies
  • notable trends
  • unexpected findings
  • anomalies
  • phenomenon
  • emphasizing
  • evolution
  • implications
  • producers
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