The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar diagram shows the total

percentage

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of films released during the period between 1996 and 2006 and

also

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shows the total

percentage

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of ticket sales in a country.

Overall

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, the bar diagram shows the total

percentage

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for the

years

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1996 and 2006 during

this

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time Drama,

Comedy

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Fantasy

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and romance-based

movies

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were released in theatres and the sale of

tickets

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was

also

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mentioned in the bar chart. During the period of 1996 and 2006 drama based

movies

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were released high in numbers all over, the theatres around the country with 26 per

cent

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in 1996 and 35 per

cent

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in 2006.

Comedy

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movies

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are a bit lower than dramas with a

percentage

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of 20 and 25.

Fantasy

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movies

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are lower than

Comedy

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with the

percentage

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of 12 and 16. The

last

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movie

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is Romance-based

movies

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are lower than all the

movies

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with a

percentage

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of 7 and it was the same for both

years

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. The sale of

tickets

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all over the country during the

years

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1996 and 2006 with their

percentage

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. Drama

movie

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tickets

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were 16 and 17 per

cent

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with a 1per

cent

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difference.

Comedy

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movie

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tickets

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were high for both

years

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with 20 and 23 per

cent

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. As usual

Fantasy

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and Romance-based

movie

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ticket selling percentages were very low for both

years

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with

fantasy

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3 and 7 per

cent

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for romance 5 and 2 per

cent

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, years, comedy, fantasy, movies, tickets, cent, movie with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
8
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

229 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

depict
significant increases/decreases
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notable trends
unexpected findings
anomalies
phenomenon
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evolution
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producers
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The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Some people think that the internet has brought people together while others think that people have become more isolated now.” Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

shops should not be allowed to sell any food or drinks that has been scientifically to be proven detrimental people's health. to what extent do you agree or disagree

Countries should produce enough food for their own population and import as little as possible. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services, such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.